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    In a trance from glance one, look how you tempt me…
    Enhanced my stance is now stunned from what u sent me…
    A smile only slight, from the knees it weakened my might…
    An eclipsed night, from your eye a twinkle blinked outta sight…
    Was it for me? Blinded, I can’t see what you do as it seeps into…
    How can it be that I want to flee from being me and become two…
    A new life two lead, a new wife-to-be, green light to plant new seed…
    Exposed hearts between you and me, each given the right to bleed…
    We now beat in unison, hear our rhythm song, see with zoom vision…
    No longer a hollow place to live in, no longer an empty space within…
    Arrested, you took my love and wrapped it, boxed it then locked it…
    Now invested, captured, I am a possession hidden in yur left breast pocket…

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    this is awesome
    No longer a hollow place to live in, no longer an empty space within…
    Arrested, you took my love and wrapped it, boxed it then locked it…
    Now invested, captured, I am a possession hidden in yur left breast pocket…

    entire piece is well thought out and written, great use of multies too, real good read john props
    Black eyes. Like a doll's eyes. When he comes at ya, he doesn't even seem to be livin'... until he bites ya, and those black eyes roll over white and then... ah then you hear that terrible high-pitched screamin
    Where blood has been shed the tree of forgiveness cannot grow

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    • #3
      fuckin amazing bro

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