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    for so long i was alone, i felt so hopeless
    i was held deep in contempt
    to help ease the ail, crashing down as hard as hail
    it's u, i believe he has sent.

    U made me cry, even changed me as a man
    for love, i did not know existed.
    Although i deeply missed my father, i no longer have to bother
    with guilt, because the grief is now lifted.

    U speak to me with such cuteness, it's almost overwhelming
    i also hear strength in your childlike voice
    with words so sweet, it could never be beat
    that's why our love will always rejoice.

    I love u deeply, even more than ever
    these words i write are oh so true.
    We will never grow apart, because deep within my heart
    there will always be a home for u.

  • #2
    A piece I wrote a while back to my girl. When I said ''It's u I believe he has sent'' I was speaking on my father who passed away in '05. He always told me when he died (he was sick) that he will find a way to make me happy.....2 months to the day of his passing I met my girlfriend, and we are still together, happy.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Native Pride View Post

      I love u deeply, even more than ever
      these words i write are oh so true.
      We will never grow apart, because deep within my heart
      there will always be a home for u.


      very nice, especially that ending part.

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      • #4
        Wow that is really touching Native. Really lovely.
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        • #5
          just read ur poem, real deep, right from the heart, it was a nice read

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