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  • "The Hypocrital Seed" [a.k.a. Heartz Of Men II]

    What's up yall? This right here is an self-critical poem about
    the nature of men. Feedback appreciated. Enjoy!

    "The Hypocrital Seed"
    [a.k.a. "Heartz Of Men II"]

    The Hypocrital seed,

    I am afraid 2 sleep...
    I solely
    say it 2 keep

    my frankly way of
    speaking from my soul
    on repeat

    Similar 2 a stereo
    that keeps
    a new hot 2PAC CD
    steadily on repeat

    I used "hot"
    cuz the lyrical
    content of 2day's MC's
    is still weak on the radio


    The Hypocrital Seed,


    every day he
    secretly fiends 4 freaks
    while
    neglecting the female soul

    as well as her emotional
    needs
    his lust is outta controll

    man, sometimes
    us men can
    act so cold & pitiful

    whether red, yellow,
    white or black
    it's still the same act of


    The Hypocrital Seed,


    daily weak apologies
    like these
    get released
    on ladies

    "baby, atleast
    I didn't lie 2 u
    & denied your accusations
    by sayin' no

    See, I do know
    I always make it
    so fuckin complicated!

    No, I don't fake it!
    Can't tell u why
    I have 2 freak these hoes
    and please 'em all naked"


    The Hypocrital Seed,

    Still a lady
    is what he needs 2 keep
    but as soon as he forms a bond
    he brakes it

    Born at a day
    when the Lord
    was tiiiiiiired of hatred


    The Hypocrital Seed,

    is hated
    by his friends
    but loved
    by his enemies

    His biggest sin?

    The fact that he
    can't appreciate the beats
    of the hearts that breathe
    around him

    he simply can't comprehend..
    unitl they bleed 2 death
    & misery
    surrounds him...

    As their spirits
    rise high above him
    and their bodies lie
    six feet deep underneath him

    he wonders why,
    reflects upon death
    until he's close 2 crying
    breathes in deeply

    then asks himself
    if they've ever loved him..
    Last edited by Yaki Kadafi; 01-09-2011, 02:05 PM.

  • #2
    thats nice man, very lyrical

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    • #3
      Amazing, very authentic. I love your poems, Yaki Kadafi, really =]

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      • #4
        Thanks for the feedback, partners!

        I tried to walk the more lyrical route on this one.
        It's kinda challenging to keep the same amount of depth within the content when doing so but
        at the end of the day an artist always has to grow and evolve

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