Tortured Soul

[Princess K]

Just something i wrote after my nephew passed away.....

my soul is torturted and tormented
im really with demons and feeling demented
sadistic thoughts envelope this being
this anger and bitterness need to be fleeing
why cant i get over the cruelty of life
it penetrates my heart, the viciousness of the knife
tumultous rollercoaster feelings of pain
dancing with the devil is leaving me lame
i cant get past the night, nor past the light
i cant get past this hatred, we fighting another plight
i need to get rid of this hold on my soul
thats left my insides destructive and cold
lay hands on me, people of higher power
redeem my soul, its being raped by misery hour by hour

[Vinnie P]

Like i said i love the vocabulary use its very powerful and its beautiful in a melancholic way. It's deep and touching, those that dont feel anything after reading this are numb

[SuWu]

Damn sorry to hear that Angel. He is in a better place right now. This is very touching.

[Vance Cuddlesworth]

Wow Angel. This is extremely touching. My heart is with you.