Dance with the devil - what do you think?

[Celph Titled]

Done my time in the penatentary
same with the 8 years of elementary
only few of my homies care for me
done cooking that shit chemically
recently I got in touch with God
we talked bout how man is flawed
looked down upon those that fought and clawed
they stared up at from the struggle shockingly in awe
I told em that paper is the devil
and heaven is a whole other level
i stepped away from the clouds and off the pedistal
woke up and start remiencing on life
the shit i did to make it through my strife
never would i make my mistakes twice
curuption in my people spread like lice
i can't stop there feind for rims & ice
money and power
flower and powder
i'd like to take a minute
& take the devils digits
take a night off to dance with him on a cold cell block
like immortal technique, but use it as a chance to cock
my 2 glocks
and blast dome shots
maybe put him in a box
end the evil and the venom
this fakin' and pretendin'
but im just a man, tho
imma make sum plans
could use more hands
we'll take over this holy land
make it our own for the people
renounce all sin & evil
thats my revelation
written for a thug nation
cuase evil's gonna be the end of me
but in death, im given an immortality
have you seen this world? its missing alot of morality
Remeber this when im gone
a prophecy fortold in song
a voice taken for the long
but a vision left livin' on
I forsaw my own death
filled with that last breath
i felt the pain lift off my chest
I was 1 of the last ones left
the couple few that stayed true
we followed every clue
couldn't be killed by a nuke
but I fell as a wish to see the peace
it was beatiful a settle middle east
a rich world, no need for a police
where we're with God no need for a preist
I saw it all as i fell
ill be back to free hell
they deserve some rest as well

so the next time i dance with the devil in the pale of night
you know as long as im gone & my vision lives on, ill put up a fight
run up on satan 14 deep & stapped
7 Angels & 7 Thugs, bows & Mac's
G'z & Saint's without anger and hate
we'll bring an end to his tempation
and nothing but love to a thug nation

decided to switch my style up, i rite this during school and it seem'd very meaningful at the time

[Vinnie P]

I must say this is the best i've seen from you. It had a poetic touch and i liked the concept. Keep it up. Propz. post more.

[Vance Cuddlesworth]

Wow...this is really good dude. impressive.

[Celph Titled]

Thanks Guy'z & Respectt, i was reading alot of pieces by Max, Native bride, and everyone and I started writing about something deeper you know Thanks guys keep doing you, and your thing respectt

[SuWu]

Thanks Guy'z & Respectt, i was reading alot of pieces by Max, Native bride, and everyone and I started writing about something deeper you know Thanks guys keep doing you, and your thing respectt

LMFAO Native bride huh

[Celph Titled]

Pride lmaoo

[007]

damn that was actually very good. the beginning and the end especially. flowed very nice at parts. definitely saw the Pac influence in the writing too thats good though, it worked well