Death Is The Best Option

[Creation]

I Wrote This Very Quick, It May Be Bad, I Need Your Honest Opinion
Sometimes I Feel Depressed So I Write Depressing Lyrics, Nothing Amazing, Let Me Know What You Think & What Should Be Changed Etc.
I Switched Up The Flow Twice In It


If I Was Born To Fail
Why Is My Goal To Win
Unsteady On A Path, Filled With Sin
I Can't Do Shit, But Take Look At My Past
Think Of All The Memories & Have A Good Laugh
Im Sick Of Living In Pain, Its Causing Nothing But Hurt
I Tell Everyone Im Happy, But I Know It Wont Work
Ive Done Everything To Try & Fix My Life
But Everything I Try, I Get Stabbed With Knife
Not Phsyically, But Mentally
This Negativity ,Gets To Me
If Im Supposed To Go,Let It Be
Losing All My Energy, Facing All My Enemies
I Fall Down Screaming Please
But No One Wants To Listen
How Would They Feel In My Position
Would They Care, Or Be Dissing
Im Starting To Feel Missing
My Friends Tell Me Im Distant
Suicidal Thoughts Got My Mind Wishing
Now Im Keeping To Myself, but everyone is watching
Its Not Easy Dealing With This Stress, Maybe Death Is The Best Option?

[baba]

damn, that was nice. I know it was depressing but this kind of stuff helps release it in a way

[winnie the poo hole]

concept and story is good but the rhymes are average
cool that you switched flow though, keep creating n u'll get better, reminds me of when I started writing (Y).

[Creation]

thanks guys, this is depressing as fuck lol
ive only really started writing stuff in the past month, i'll post some other things soon, not depressing ones lol

[LiquidOcelot]

wow. i read it like twice, started trying to rap in to create a flow.... if u seriously feel like this keep ya head up. life can be hard at time but seriously always think of the positives..... people live in war zones and no nothing about technology like we do. and have so little to help them but yet they live with what we have. also we dont know how long were gonna be here. so live for as long as you can. any life is better than none!

[Creation]

wow. i read it like twice, started trying to rap in to create a flow.... if u seriously feel like this keep ya head up. life can be hard at time but seriously always think of the positives..... people live in war zones and no nothing about technology like we do. and have so little to help them but yet they live with what we have. also we dont know how long were gonna be here. so live for as long as you can. any life is better than none!

thanks man,
& no, im not feeling like that, sometimes your mindstate can be set in this situation, thats why i wrote it

[LiquidOcelot]

sometimes your mindstate can be set in this situation, thats why i wrote it

well at least u feel comfortable writing this... and i know how u feel. but some things can be put in words.. i could write a book on stuff but i just learn to bottle it all... keep it up though. better to get it out. wish i could give myself that freedom. i just care too much about what people think

[LastMotherfuckerBreathin]

I like it very much. Sometimes, this needed a "kick" out of life. YAFUD