my unfound love.

[eerik0]

Sometimes thinkin bout
Where´s my love at
maybe she just passin by all the time
N Can´t find you at the same time

Could it be like mystery
Or I just Ain´t ready for ya.

Still when im cryin
Rememberin my past love
All the memoriiz n romance
We´ve had in past

Askin god how long does it last
Like I ask Where´s my missin love?
you know cause god you are above me.

Like the time fly´s
We change n people change around us.
Can´t live in past
Or I should ask n change what to do?
Don´t stopin
Cause still got to move on n go futher.
For my own life
Life is beauty if you keepin head up n raise it.
Makin you stronger makin me stronger
yo so don´t stop or quit.
Beauty is up a head.

[Laceylace]

Askin god how long does it last
Like I ask Where´s my missin love?
you know cause god you are above me.


I like that alot

[eerik0]

I´m appreciated thanks.

[Makaveli5458]

nice but not much rhyme in it unless it wan't ment to still good anyway.

[brad]

Doesn't matter if theres not much ryhme that still was great nice job.

[eerik0]

It´s okay It´s not always for some rhymes I´m trying to get some feelin from u n story to reach you . But critics always makin me stronger I know I have a long way to go .Still I´m appreciated so thanks. Stayin positive...