success or failure.

[eerik0]

thinkin bout my sin
too early for a son
but heaven forgives me
cause my lord is walkin with me
like I talkin with you
all the time when I´m alone
n flyin away from the ground
sick of livin when the dark shadow comes around
devilz tryin to take my life
n hide my future wife
but just dig deeper into life
success grows to the top like a skyscraper
don´t playa hate
gave what´s you gave
take what you take
make something to think about
that´s what life all about
use your head
success gomes from your heart
don´t wanna fall apart
be some part what´s comin from your heart
god knows n hears
world is full of shows n fears
open your mouth
close your eyes
like we tradin music for helpin
side to side
brothaz got they´r own side
where they don´t hide
like bonnie n clyde
never hide
we need to struggle for our freedom
n for future´s kingdom
use your wisdom n words
all of us havin mission
in this world no matter where you live
be alive as long as you can
complete your mission n close this door
fade away n run far away
there you can stay away
for trouble n madness
maybe someday another mission waitin
they callin you back
to begin it from the start n finish it to the end.

[Omar]

good poem bro ..

there are some parts where the english might be wrong .. but then i know its not ur first language so small mistakes will happen here n there ..

if i have time and if u can permit me, i'll fix it up for u a little..

[MENTION=8962]eerik0

[eerik0]

Thankkkss broo! It would be great If ya fix them.

[Omar]

Thankkkss broo! It would be great If ya fix them.

alright man.. i'll do it when i have time.. i'll change it slightly and hopefully it will sound good

[eerik0]

Yeap I´m appreciated n waitin.

[djukak]

Beautifull poem. Great...

[eerik0]

Thank you !bro