mama please don´t cry.

[eerik0]

sittin in my room thinkin
kickin it into some rhymes
what I have done
my trust is gone with my mama
maintain still the same drama
felt myself as a fool
left my home soon
me as a a lost soul
cause I was hangin with some mothafckas n whores
in this night we´re drinkin n smokin
my mama didn´t knew anything
but I always need ya
n I´m still the same thang
got home in the next day
another lost trust game
mama was worried whole night
she was angry but she knows
I get crazy in my younger dayz
in these dayz I´m breakin some rulez
we don´t talk so much
our hearts still keepin in touch
I know I have hurt you
but mama please trust me
maybe thinkin I´m so careless
all I ask is forgiveness
from the outside maybe you can´t see
from insde me my soul is in pain
what you can´t see
I know I have to change myself
n be true to myself
someway we all know what it takes
someday we all make mistakes
I´m your son always
In all those different wayz
I have made harm
but stay calm
you´r still my mom
we all grow n learn

[MakaveliStillBallin]

True feelings for real, you should rap some of your lyrics...

[eerik0]

yes I have done something already but the accent is makin me quite sick. I have to practice n read some books to develop.
Still thanks bout your feedback bro!