belief in kids.

[eerik0]

kids full alot of fearin
I see they´r dreams hidin
please start talkin
be true
I´m in your crew
we need you inspiration flyin
hope you start tryin
if you don´t then I start cryin
you´r the ones who change the world
cause that´s what I have heard
me and my spiritual connection
between me and god´s construction
find the right spot
then you don´t stop
belive in yourself
you can do it by yourself
life gonna turn your head down sometime
you can feel it like infection
in my selection belive in yourself n god
then alot of unpossible seems so possible.

[Omar]

@eerik0

Changed some things and gave it a little twist .. hope u like my version of YOUR poem .. Remember its still your poem...



Kids today are fearing
Their minds closed afraid of dreaming
Why cant you stay true and find a meaning?
Inspiration helps you fly
Only if you decide to try
Wake up and change the world,Lets not cry!
We all God's children
And we're spiritually connected
Lets stand up for our brothers who are neglected
You need to find the right spot
Believe in yourself, never stop
When life holds u down
Get up and reach for the top
Turn infection into affection
Believe in a dream
And learn to strive
Impossible it may seem
But see it come alive.





Let me know what u think

[MakaveliStillBallin]

@eerik0

Changed some things and gave it a little twist .. hope u like my version of YOUR poem .. Remember its still your poem...



Kids today are fearing
Their minds closed afraid of dreaming
Why cant you stay true and find a meaning?
Inspiration helps you fly
Only if you decide to try
Wake up and change the world,Lets not cry!
We all God's children
And we're spiritually connected
Lets stand up for our brothers who are neglected
You need to find the right spot
Believe in yourself, never stop
When life holds u down
Get up and reach for the top
Turn infection into affection
Believe in a dream
And learn to strive
Impossible it may seem
But see it come alive.





Let me know what u think

No, now it's your poem
And i like it !

[eerik0]

okay thanks !! I´ll change it. But I would like to be with you n people who support me. Maybe we would create something n hang out as a homiez. I think here people don´t understand me so much. what´s your thoughts about that`?

[eerik0]

good thanks little bit worried that I have so much to learn. I started at the end of the last year writing....

[Omar]

dont worry man .. i did english literature in uni for like 4 years so i do have some experience with this shit ..

keep writing and practicing ..

all i m doing is help u on your way ... aight ... keeep in touch bro

[eerik0]

Yep! I´ll keep it working on .

[MakaveliStillBallin]

Y'all can't stop the real shit ! Keep it up eerik0 ! !

[eerik0]

really supporting your strong words here! bro

[Vinnie P]

Thats was powerful man keep it up, maybe we can do a collab one day lol but on paper. I'mma drop something aswell now.

[eerik0]

yeah sure! Thanks!bro.

[Nikola]

Thats great.

However, when I see Makaveli545584845/Streethoe posts i loose belief in kids.

[eerik0]

thanks

[brad]

Great stuff dude keep posting your stuff!

[eerik0]

appreciated bro! I´ll keep goin...