Maybe broke.

[eerik0]

Sometimes when I feel broke then I smoke
We learn so we can earn
When I see the rain then I see the pain
I belive god forgives me what I´ve done wrong
Still I see signs to stay strong
I´m looking up to the sky I´m asking for a replay
Up in heaven with my fantasy I see little house
Up there is a door
Kids who died young laying on the floor
When I walk around the house I see smile again
Finally I see peace as a true piece
Belive there´s a golden day
Day what keep devils away.

[eerik0]

Feedback please?

[WesleyPipes]

Its good. If you try multiple rhyme schemas then it would even sound 2pac-like

[eerik0]

Thank you ..