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  • Don´t fall down!

    I´m falling down to the floor
    Trying to open the heaven´s door
    Demons in my head makin me insane
    Lord I´m in pain and lost in this game
    Please come and save me
    Cause I lost my brain
    In this cold world we´re all stuck
    Hopeless and no luck
    I see goverment don´t give a f*ck
    This makes me die
    Cause we´re living poor
    Every day I see it more
    This planet ain´t fair
    Maybe there´s a stair
    Dreaming about paradise
    Hoping there´s something nice
    Still We all see the evil
    But please don´t stop believin
    Gotta protect your state
    Stop being fake
    There´s people who won´t stop the hate
    No matter how wrong you are
    How strong you are
    Some fake phonies left you alone
    But they never forget how we´re grown
    Now you gotta be on your own
    Don´t let demons to lead your way
    Have to stay strong in your soul to keep them away.

    - © Eerik.A, 2012 -

  • #2
    that was well written man .. u have improved a lot from ur previous poems .. there r only a few small grammatical errors .. which i can fix later .. but other than that its good man .. keep writing man and i hope i see u here more often Eerik



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