Don´t fall down!

[eerik0]

I´m falling down to the floor
Trying to open the heaven´s door
Demons in my head makin me insane
Lord I´m in pain and lost in this game
Please come and save me
Cause I lost my brain
In this cold world we´re all stuck
Hopeless and no luck
I see goverment don´t give a f*ck
This makes me die
Cause we´re living poor
Every day I see it more
This planet ain´t fair
Maybe there´s a stair
Dreaming about paradise
Hoping there´s something nice
Still We all see the evil
But please don´t stop believin
Gotta protect your state
Stop being fake
There´s people who won´t stop the hate
No matter how wrong you are
How strong you are
Some fake phonies left you alone
But they never forget how we´re grown
Now you gotta be on your own
Don´t let demons to lead your way
Have to stay strong in your soul to keep them away.

- © Eerik.A, 2012 -

[Omar]

that was well written man .. u have improved a lot from ur previous poems .. there r only a few small grammatical errors .. which i can fix later .. but other than that its good man .. keep writing man and i hope i see u here more often Eerik