Short Poem- Life & Death

[Omar]

just randomly made this poem right now in the last 20 mins .. pls tel me what u think..



Dead




I fell and I kept falling
Until it seemed like I was floating
Like echoes I heard my name calling
Something I thought worth noting.

I looked I gazed and I stared
Far below lay a terrible fire
I ran I flew and felt scared
Desperately trying to get higher

Along came 2 wings and a tall rope
I caught it and held it real tight
Who gave me this glimmer of hope?
Before long I saw the light.

[Scream]

Short Poem- Life & Death

Damm that's beautiful man. Good work. I can't believe that only took 20mins!

[Omar]

Damm that's beautiful man. Good work. I can't believe that only took 20mins!

appreciate the words bro ... i love creative writing and majored in literature .. but i hardly ever write shit ... should try more often ..

[Scream]

appreciate the words bro ... i love creative writing and majored in literature .. but i hardly ever write shit ... should try more often ..

Keep it up man you got something special there!

[Shady El-Shafie]

Well written, Omar!
I love the ending transition for the last 2 line

''Who gave me this glimmer of hope?
And Behold I saw the light.''

[Omar]

Well written, Omar!
I love the ending transition for the last 2 line

''Who gave me this glimmer of hope?
And Behold I saw the light.''

appreciate it man .. look forward to more from u though .. keep it real bro

[Yakidafi]

This was good! U should write more often ye