Conceptual Misunderstanding

[Shady El-Shafie]

The beauty of the beast
His heart will never be deceased
Though ever in war and peace
His heart shall shine till his demise
He awaits the home coming people
Who shall spit on his image
And talk to ask when problems fly by
his mind as a flower will shine high
Now people try to act tough
But now people only blow trees off
Where people serve no mind
needing a place with same mintality
But who cares to understand me ?

[Princess K]

this is a gud piece, short yet says it all, made a good read, waiting to read more

[Shady El-Shafie]

thx
i wanted to know what did u feel when ya read it and what did u interpret

[Kalogerus]

good work man keep it up

EDIT: i would tell u its a great choice of words and the poem is good but what i feel is sumthin different as m in a mindstate that nothin really affect me... BUT it was a great poem.. and keep it up

[Shady El-Shafie]

thx mate

[Native Pride]

Nice piece as always. A lil harder to interpret than your previous pieces. Sounds to me like a Battle Cry.