Devil In Disguise

[Native Pride]

Devil In Disguise (to Alcohol)

U Unleashed A Deadly Dose Of Sickness
On My Part.
U Caused Violent Outbreaks
& Broke So Many Hearts.

U Defeated My Only Hero
Who U Took Away Too Soon.
He Fell Under Your Attractive Spell
& Was Slowly Consumed By Your Doom.

Though U Might Seem Appealing
The Devil Within U Is Always The Same.
U Just Bring It Out In The Best Of Us
& Lead Us On Into Disray.

[Kalogerus]

a very nice piece
but there is not enuff evil

and use of vocabulary is simple
always remember when u wanna talk about sumthin deep u shud use deep vocab

but its a good piece

props

[Celph Titled]

I thought it was a good choice of vocab bro, i liked its simplicity but strength in message like you get what she's saying without losing intrest casue its real you know