BigR's First Song

[Esoteric]

Hey guys, this is a song I made. I'm rapping the 3 verses, but I got some help on the chorus from a friend. Hope you enjoy it.

EDIT: NEW RECORDING ON A BETTER MIC:

https://mega.nz/#!4Nwh0YAC!0VURuNNgTTaLYHGKS17aEfK9ZNCej1zFLqOPeR-qKwg

http://www24.zippyshare.com/v/L6iIckSr/file.html

old recording on youtube (shitty quality)

[adoutlaw]

i like it tbh seems like some real emotion there bro and some thoughts I can relate to

[Esoteric]

Thanks for replying to my thread!!

[johnnie360]

Like I said bro, you are a great writer. Keep at this.

[Husxle]

Great lyrics but I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..

Other than that it's dope..

[Exodus]

I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..

that's what I thought too, but now I like it. fits very well to the lyrics and instrumental.

[MENTION=1052]BigR well done

[adoutlaw]

I'm not sure where u are getting the feeling part of it from to me it fits perfectly its not a dynamic party rap It seems to me more of a painful/depressed type song correct me if I'm wrong [MENTION=1052]BigR

[Esoteric]

Great lyrics but I feel like you need to put a lil' more feeling into it my dude..

Other than that it's dope..

that's what I thought too, but now I like it. fits very well to the lyrics and instrumental.

[MENTION=1052]BigR well done

I'm not sure where u are getting the feeling part of it from to me it fits perfectly its not a dynamic party rap It seems to me more of a painful/depressed type song correct me if I'm wrong [MENTION=1052]BigR

Thanks for the feedback. Like it's been said, it's just the vibe for the lyrics, wouldn't sound right being hyped up at 130 bpm's for a song about suicide lol

[adoutlaw]

great I knew my sad times and shit experiences would come in handy I got the vibe straight away

[Fizzymoon]

Great lyrics, goes very well with the instrumental

I look forward to hearing more


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[Esoteric]

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Got a new mic a while ago, re-recording this song. Here is an mp3 download if you choose to check it out:

https://mega.nz/#!4Nwh0YAC!0VURuNNgTTaLYHGKS17aEfK9ZNCej1zFLqOPeR-qKwg

http://www24.zippyshare.com/v/L6iIckSr/file.html