Wow what a pleasent suprise wasn't expecting it to be this good!
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*A Day At A Time - Chuck Dirty Featuring Ethan*
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Damn was fuckin lovin this.The beat,lyrics,and the chorus that hooks you in just make it perfect.Id record an intro and more outro for it though.It sound like something off a retail album and shit! Keep up with this! Rappin is my therapy but idk about you lol.
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This track is actually real good, good rhyming from Chuck, idea from the chorus is good.
But, the chorus would be even better (in my opinion) if you, Chuck, 'stretch' the word that rhymes on thaang in the chorus, in this case the word 'can' so it becomes 'caan'.
Ethan does this, but u don't, it sounds 2 me like you're bored at that point.
Maybe its a good thing to think about that, for later on, (what u also did with this one). If u wanna reach more sort of people, you can put something on that track that has for every group of people something.
You don't hear anybody here say, I completely dislike this
Example taken from this track: relaxing beat-somebody singing in the chorus-hard lyrics.
Thats a nice recipe u got there sir...
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