Please Stay

[jamaal]

Daddy, please stay, I promise I wont cry
Daddy, dont go, wipe the tears from from eyes
Hold me tight and cuddle me
I wont mind if you hurry me
Daddy, please stay

I'll eat all the food upon my plate
Even though it wont taste great
I'll always shut the garden gate
And show some patience, when we wait
Daddy, please stay

I wont care if you shout at me
Or send me to my room when I'm bad
I wont let you go without me
I cant, cos you're my dad
Daddy, please stay

My sisters say you're now a star
And live in heaven, so very far
Why cant I be where you are
My memories a forgotten scar
Daddy, please stay

I know you're never coming back
It makes my angry that you're gone
The summer days, forever black
Without you, I cant carry on
Daddy please wait..........................

[Shiva]

Wow. That was really touching, i felt that man.. Deep stuff. Great job

[onealien]

shyt b...

deep yo...very nice indeed...

reminds me another daddy one u did long time ago...still got it?

[jamaal]

naw i lost it when mb crashed

[insanity]

this is very good. so u finally showing your softer side ? dont stop creating !

[Native Pride]

wow, just seen this. very deep. i really like this one

[Heather]

wow that is pretty deep. very good

[Samantha]

what can i say this poem is really beautiful piece of art, somehow it reminds me of my childhood