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    as i sit back and wonder how
    rap could get so wack
    i wish we had 2Pacalypse Now
    its no longer music
    hip hop is now useless
    remember thug life that shit waz ruthless
    but still had heart
    so why do these teens chuze this
    it aint smart
    and not to name names
    but that mother fucker wayne
    must be insain
    2 think he can even come close
    talkin bout hoes cars and money
    but where im from they sleepin on their toes
    and aint a thing funny
    so he can go ahead and pose
    fake blood
    in the rap game hez a dud
    wheres the meaning
    cuz on the streets they fiendin
    4 real music
    and these dumb teens confuse this
    with hip hop but its pop
    remember what nas said
    rap is dead
    ever since pac die
    rap has been a lie
    becuz they bragin
    but think about the things u never had and
    they laffin
    in ure face
    so bring rap back
    4 christ sake
    b4 i crank that soulja boy
    im gonna turn up nas
    i said it once and ill say it again
    rap is dead all we have is what was
    bcuz now its all about a life of sin
    and fuck gay z
    its all non educational
    they tried 2 play me
    no longer a threat
    im learnin nothin how fake can rap get
    dont know when rap fell
    rip Big L
    probly after Ls death and his last breath
    ever since then i could never hope 2 see
    who else could be called a dope Mc
    unfortanutly talent this game lacks
    ice t was right fuck soulja fag
    Last edited by Makaveliandcheese; 10-17-2010, 08:00 AM.
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  • #2
    lol hahaha diss soulja boy ahahaah
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    • #3
      I liked it
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      • #4
        your syllable structure doesn't really flow that well but I like the ideas . Verse in the english language usually doesn't go like 5 syllabels then 8, then 4 then 6 and so on there is usually some loose structure at least with lines varying a syllable or two in the over all patterm.
        Originally posted by thuggincold
        maybe pac wouldve been a porn director and fuck all those hot girls from porn along wit the outlawz shit maybe a featured of snoop gangbangin a girl wit pac

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        • #5
          ^^^
          have u checked out any of my other stuff this 1 isnt my best lol not even close this 1 was sloppy at best. but thank u 4 the constructive criticism
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