Please Feedback (Drop #1)

[RoyalPurple]

TIDE

[7thVigilante]

i see you tryin to spit like pac

[MR. ROJAS]

lol evry one mentions tryin to sound like pac.....good flow i loved it keep pushing u flowed grea

[RoyalPurple]

i see you tryin to spit like pac

i dont see any similarity to be honest but thats yo opinion.thanks.

[JackV]

to be honest cliche

you should look into the things you take time to write about it

[RoyalPurple]

to be honest cliche

you should look into the things you take time to write about it

can you explain further what you exactly mean with "cliche"?i know the word but what´s your point?

let´s be honest, sometimes any hip-hop track can be "too cliche" as you say.

everday struggle, drugs, guns, fights, prison, knives, b***es,etc.

what i did (or what i thought that i do ) was: mix battlerhymes with everyday life plus horrorcore plus lil bit political,etc.

[RoyalPurple]

izzuuppiiiin

[Yakidafi]

I think it is mediocre.

I cant get a good flow, and I don't see the message, even though it's a psycopath drug abuser. Have you listened to "necro"? ^^

The rhymes are not the most innovative and catchy. like For me "steez" is when your cool and calm, not wild and killer.

and "Who´s To Blame, For The Mess We Created?" for me doesn't fit with the rest of the text.

I liked your style in drop 2 ^^ maybe it fits u better, u really feel like this towards society etc? Texts becomes best if u can relate to it yourself I guess.