Short Drop #2 (Please Feedback)

[RoyalPurple]

Is It The Winter-Blues Or Is It The Truth?
That Makes Me Feel Like I´m A Wise Fool?
Heart Fulla Terror Mind Fulla Stress
Still Searchin For God, Who Will Stop The Mess?
All By Myself Fuck My Homies Nobody Knows Me
Even If I Hang Out I´m Still Porr N Lonely
Put My Faith In God, Trust Nobody But Moms
I Wonder If Ther´s Cure For Mental Scars
Fuck Fancy Cars & Your Material Aspects
Even Your Freinds Stab You From The Back
It´s Lack Of Tranquility We All Suffer From
When It´s Time To Cry, Who Can I Call?
People Will Be WIth You Only If You Ball
Nobody Cares For Your Pain & Depression
They Betray YOu Without Exception
Where´s The Light?Where Can I Find Peace?
Will I Ever Be Happy Before I´m Deceased?
Will I Ever Have A Wife Or Even Kids?
So Many Questions, Dunno Where To Start
Light A Candle, Always In The Dark
Pray For Better Days, Tryin To Live My Life The Right Way
I Know Crime Don´t Pay So I Hope To Survive The Other Day
1 Luv

[Yakidafi]

I'm prolly not the right guy to give feedback on lyrics of any kind

I like the 2nd half starting form tranquility alot.

First is good too, though first two bars u could remove or remake, feels like alot of poems start like that so for me it sounds boring.
porr= poor

Hope it can somewhat help you.

Edit: Better flow in the second part then the 1st.

[RoyalPurple]

I'm prolly not the right guy to give feedback on lyrics of any kind

I like the 2nd half starting form tranquility alot.

First is good too, though first two bars u could remove or remake, feels like alot of poems start like that so for me it sounds boring.
porr= poor

Hope it can somewhat help you.

Edit: Better flow in the second part then the 1st.

thanks a lot, im working on it, please comment my other drops too (one more is in the making right now)

im trying to make it serious type of hobby, i try to improve myself day by day so any kinda feedback is a good thing.