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    It was suppose to be something with max payne. but meh..

    A magnum in my hand
    i flip the scripture
    6 heavenly shots make the blood shed
    The color is red as i paint the picture
    This is an unbearable “like to kill” mixture
    The Max Payne you know is a scribble
    I’m the new result with the unknown pieces of the riddle
    A riddle is less mysterious than the joker
    I wish i was the joker to make her smile cuz i love her
    I gave her my heart
    Literally she could feel the living pulse of the organ
    It’s a bloody love, i hope its a good start
    Wait it is a start, i need a surgeon now to sew my hurt
    Shit the surgeon is dead in the dirt
    My heart hole breeze is a pandemic flow
    Axiomatic flue and radiation, feel the glow

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    Not bad, i would have liked to see the lines a little longer and balanced out a bit more but it's still good and readable, i like the style and the imagery of this piece.

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