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  • stoned freestyle vol.1

    FEEDBACK PLEASE

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    Who I Am

    smoked out my mind, bumpin game, hittin keys
    how many of yall muthafuckas got deal wit this?
    my anger, rage from hell and demonic evil like joker
    i was an alcoholic now the gotta with a smoker
    brains cell illustrate thoughts like it´s a comic
    da haze n my lungs get you high like cosmis
    thinkin bout my life, bitches i met, they got fat
    time´s flyin like an arrow, im still a shadow of my sorrow
    one-many-army,dealin wit envy,fuck friends,im ridin solo
    dreamin bout betta days, stayin´stressed, devil´s fuckin my mind
    still here, still smokin, still fuckin wit´my homies, still on tha grind
    im aint hard 2 find like pac,40,c-bo,richie eich and d-shot
    some still thinkin im addicted to hip-hop, 2 the gangsta shit
    pac was a soldier, his words were wisdom, luv every word he spit
    flip the scrip and all the truth comes out to be bullshit
    politics fuckin´our mind wit corruption and lies
    if i see one of them i will send em str8 2 sky
    i didnt cry when i left city, lost my uncle and grandfather
    there never will be one another like them,
    all my people who passed away, relatives, the friends
    all the enemies i lost, not thru me but sometimes i wished it
    im so twisted i got my own fam see me gettin sadistic
    psychopathic criminale insane str8 goin loco
    and when im outta my mind and mad i gotta smoke me some more
    the chronic, the dro, the blow, the ganja call it what u want
    it keeps gettin you under the influence, sweat leaf, fuck beef
    i´d ratha smoke out wit my enemies, start shit and fuck them up
    hit em up, let them die slow like makaveli, ridin on my enemies
    people say please, dont go crazy over, dont start fuckin up the police
    they´re pigs beat u down for nothing and laugh, and i laugh too peep
    when i got my knife in their neck screamin "die you muthafuckin pig"
    these words are comin from young menace, the senseless, the old
    like prodigy, sometimes "my warm hearts turns cold"
    and now let´s finish my murderous flow.

  • #2
    its not bad dude, but u need to find ur own style and ur own wordplay.

    i mean ur stealing lines from almost every popular rap song.

    ur better than the game tho lol

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    • #3
      yeah...twas aiight...

      kinda choppy...a lot of cliche shyt...no creativity imo...

      good message tho...feelin the weight of life on ya...

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