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  • Kelly has a secret (Revised)

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    Last edited by Cesare Borgia; 02-14-2016, 09:50 PM.

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    nice cesare, its shortened but still has that essence, i feel both versions do stand on its own.

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    • #3
      damn thats nice, you have a real rare talent when it comes to story-telling in ya rhymes cesare, always provoking others to think and feel what you wrote about, thats dope, +rep
      Black eyes. Like a doll's eyes. When he comes at ya, he doesn't even seem to be livin'... until he bites ya, and those black eyes roll over white and then... ah then you hear that terrible high-pitched screamin
      Where blood has been shed the tree of forgiveness cannot grow

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