2010's "First Blood": Shiva v onealien

[onealien]

standard rules apply:
a. 1 verse, 10-12 lines/bars
b. no biting, flipping
c. first person listed on thread title drops first
d. first person to get 5 votes advances (complete votes only will be counted)
e. EACH BATTLER MUST CHECK IN TO THEIR THREAD BEFORE DROPS...
f. gerneral comments or discussion posts will be moved out of the voting threads
f. have fun...

consider this my check in...

[Shiva]

Ch-ch-checkkkkkkkk in..

[Shiva]

My first EVER battle so go easy on me

prepare for the defeat of the now mortal onealien
force the phrases through your head it penetrates your cranium
my words are compared to rockets they'll blast you back to the universe
you might be in space but i prepared plans for the extra-terrestial hearse
call this a curse, i think not but looks like you already need a nurse
i might not beat you in this battle but hey it could be worse
until then, the judge of this battle is the members on notorious makaveli
some call this a beat down but i call it brutality
is this now a formality of you opening your eyes to reality?
because this is a b-a-t-t-l-e and it looks like the victory's, going to me.

[onealien]

freestyle yo...

Yo check this, I fry dudes like u for breakfast, believe this…
I rhyme reckless, leave u breathless, like yur eyes on cleavage…(avi)
Yur a played out butthead like Bevis, while I ‘head’ butts to relieve stress…
Tell ya moms, cuz next week ill be on yur street ready to drop bombs…
U can post the story, news boy, “Shiva’s Mom Readily Slops Shlong”…
On this site and every other place your little fat fingers belong…
Make this part 3 to a sig of yurs that’s already way the fuk too long…
See how I spit lines laced with venom? Taste the tartness, not ripe yet…
I aint even got hype, yet I still speak to the masses, call me the skype vet…
As you start to squint n pucker, they’ll say “gotdayum, dude killed that sucker”…


loll...

[Bushi]

hmm yeah so ill vote shiva coz he actually rhymed half the time, so he doesnt deserve a KO.

[Chuck Dirty]

oneal.. but i mean damn good try shiva good job for your first time out.. but yea my vote to oneal

[jamaal]

yea, I vote alien, but i agree with chuck, good 1st attempt, and heres a lil tip shiva, next time dont underline the rhymes, makes it harder to read and then people get bored real quick

[onealien]

2-1 for onealien so far...

need more votes here peeps...

[Princess K]

onealien...

[Vinnie P]

onealien...

this.

[Oscar]

onealien...but as chuck said..really really really really good try..better than mine lol...

[Shiva]

5-1. Good job Alien!

[onealien]

yeah thanks...

and now that its over..i can say that was a noble drop shiv...for ya first one...

u got potential kid...

[Smoka]

Both guys came sick, But damn Onealien was just this little bit sicker

My vote goes to Onealien, Shiva u brought the heat aswell

Edit: it already ended lol, only read the first page