F126 v Bushi

[spiderman]

Right... this is suicide, but whatever, I'm bored and Bushi being a cocky fuck so I want to beat him even though I know I won't.


Rules:

Battling Rules:

10-16 lines
No biting
No verse flipping


Voting Rules

5 Votes to win (NO KO)
Give explanations with votes
No "I don't like F126 so I'ma vote for Bushi" style votes (sorry everyone)



I'm writing my verse now... this is gonna be epic...

^ Drop that shit , let him know how you really feel about him with that verse.

[spiderman]

I don't even know why I'm writing something for this whore bitch,
Who'd a thought it? Them there munchies done left you like the bitch from Norbit,
I'll lyrically rip you up, hit you up, stitch you up so terribly you gonna definitely need Group Therapy,
Oh look at ikkle Bushi from Lisbon, come with your best bars and attempt to bury me,
Coz when I flow it, you don't worry me, when I see your bars I think - so it's a lie Portugal is the home of po-ets?
'Nuff said, I'ma cause a big upset, I'ma dominate you, but it's not the type your used to......it's not butt sex,
And let me ask you something partner, apparent charmer, so called knight in shining armor,
How the fuck is it that you can be all of the above, and still not be shit? Bruv Is that why you smoke marijuana?
To find an escape from your worthless fucking existence? Now tell me,
D'you find solace within the pig which sits in your room?
It seems that all you do is hit the cigs, cry bout your life and then make some sigs in your room...


Would do more, but time for a last wank before Ramadan

[Bushi]

now aint this typical of a kid, askin me to battle then play victimized
3 feet high and rising while i write this in the event of ya demise
wich i will make sure as ur obviously jealous of my weed consumption
i set u in combustion, leave u in ashes, no notion u just become an assumption
look at u in the net, screaming and swearing ur shit is hyped and fresh
thanks on the punchline, mr rotten fish from fucking bangladesh
ya lifes a mess, take a rest u gotta save ur energies for ramadan
ill make a scan and tell u my plan, when it began desinformation like iran
u ran, i laughed when u begged bobby to sell u that gram of sticky green weed
good luck not gettin robbed, u gonna go and plead on the next man's greed
take heed as battle rules imply i gotta make fun of any girl ur with
but u a virgin kid, so im gonna go smoke and fuck now, u hand 5 on it
now u know next time ya wanna get fucked ya gotta say bushi please...
fuck what am i saying, u already do that whenever u beg for OG's.

[>War|Gamez<]

Here are the opinions

F126 - Your started off pretty decent , but quickly u slided downhill all the way till the end where u revived a tiny 1&#37; , the end.
In my point of view u were all over the place and could barely ryhme or flow, u need to exit from the backdoor.

Bushi - Well , i fuckin loved all of his verse from the start till the end, bushi did go a lil off in 1 place , but he was mainly always on point , ryhmed and flowed pretty well.


Vote goes 2 Bushi .

[Chuck Dirty]

*foy lost points for conceeding the battle before it even started..
*lines were kinda weak but actually showed a lil improvement from the last time i read ur shit...
*no real rhythm to the flow of the verse...

* bushi nice flow to the verse
* better and more complex rhymes
*the bangladesh line was nice too


vote bushi

[onealien]

my take...

foy...
line 1 started hard, line 2 wak...anything referencing norbit is played and elementary
line 3 was ok, and a direct punch...line 4 weak
line 5 hardly rhymed, ran long...line 6, was a good punch except as stated u said it was an upset...that means yur admitting inferiority
line 7 was a good lead to 8, but 8 was weak...
line 9, 10, 11 was a decent outro...wuld have been better in the middle leading to an outro with more sting...

bushi -
line 1 n 2 was kind of a slow but demeaning intro...think about jumpin on the mic like u wanna kill em from the start
line 3 and 4 was nice and went hand in hand...weed consumption, then smoked him like a blunt...
line 5 n 6 were ok...rhyming was good...a lil soft imo
line 7 n 8 were ok...got personal
line 9 was a nice personal...10 didnt follow hard imo...the robbed part??
lines 11 and 12 were nice, personal punches and good flow...
and the last 2 were hilarious, personal punches...i lol'd...good outro


overall...bushi did wat he was supposed to do...

vote bus hi...

[jamaal]

yea, what he said lol, plus I dont like foy so im gonna vote fa bushi haha, on the real tho i have to vote bushi, lines were more direct, and personal, plus good contiinous flows from line to line really helped, but this from foy "D'you find solace within the pig which sits in your room?
It seems that all you do is hit the cigs, cry bout your life and then make some sigs in your room...", shows some real promise, keep on keeping homie lol

[spiderman]

lol 4-0, one more vote for bushi win, 5 more for me :/


thx bobby, i was worried people wouldnt get the actual pig joke, which i don think anyone did

FYI bushi has a drawing (or paintin or someth) of a pig in his room

[Bushi]

its actually a stuffed pig hanged on a rope...

ud be better off making punchlines about my mona lisa..

bobby praised u coz u went smart making a personal line and show some technique
cigs to sigs... even tho u reused room


but since we on explainings, ill explain the robbed line to alien, foy asked bobby for weed, and bobby told him he would hook him up with his dealers, hence foy goin there without bobby gonna end up robbed of his money.