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"Being in Marin City was like a small town so it taught me to be more straight forward with my style. Instead of of being so metaphorical with the rhyme where i might say something like...
I'm the hysterical, lyrical miracle
I'm the hypothetical, incredible....
I was encouraged to go straight at it and hit it dead on and not waste time trying to cover things..." - 2Pac
Artefacts are pretty well hidden, digging the scarface sample, just one thing - is the chorus in the same key as your instrumentation as it sounds a bit flat?
I'd like to impart some words that I've always lived by:
Artefacts are pretty well hidden, digging the scarface sample, just one thing - is the chorus in the same key as your instrumentation as it sounds a bit flat?
I tried the best to pitch the beat to match the pitch of the chorus. I don't think I'll ever be able to get it exactly right unless I find a different beat that works even better.
"Being in Marin City was like a small town so it taught me to be more straight forward with my style. Instead of of being so metaphorical with the rhyme where i might say something like...
I'm the hysterical, lyrical miracle
I'm the hypothetical, incredible....
I was encouraged to go straight at it and hit it dead on and not waste time trying to cover things..." - 2Pac
I tried the best to pitch the beat to match the pitch of the chorus. I don't think I'll ever be able to get it exactly right unless I find a different beat that works even better.
Yep, it works pretty well but is a bit flat that's all. Have you considered dropping the hook all together?
I'd like to impart some words that I've always lived by:
Wow I love it.. But yea a lil flat... Keep us updated if you decide to work on it some more!
"If the world hates you, know that it has hated me before it hated you.
If you were of the world, the world will love you as it's own; but because you are not of the world,
but I chose you out of the world, therefore the world hates you."
-John 15:18-19
"I am he that liveth, and was dead; and, behold, I am alive for evermore, Amen; and have the keys of hell and of death." -Revelation 1:18
Hey! I love the chords of your beat. Just a suggest: i think you should reduce high pass and eq the pads. Then you should definitely build your track around that dark piano chord and rise the volume and eq of the bassline you did with the same chord like the Snoop Dogg's "Gz & Hustlas" beat:
Man while i'm writing this i'm relistenning to you mix. Damn what a potential with that piano chord! Is it a sample?
The acoustic guitar is on point and fits well the piano chords. Did you make the guitars with a plugin?
The vocals fit well the beat but i don't know if it is a cpu or if it's a blend but the quality of vocals arent good enough for me. I would love you to try my suggest and put a studio acapella on it. You asked for opinion and this is mine!
For the record, I didn't produce the beat. I put this long clip out to see if I should put a full out. Wasn't sure on it.
"Being in Marin City was like a small town so it taught me to be more straight forward with my style. Instead of of being so metaphorical with the rhyme where i might say something like...
I'm the hysterical, lyrical miracle
I'm the hypothetical, incredible....
I was encouraged to go straight at it and hit it dead on and not waste time trying to cover things..." - 2Pac
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