I also used the sting sample of When Thugz Cry and recorded this song on it

[Charlie]

http://soundcloud.com/gener80s/d-chesron-my-letter-last-will

I use the same set up as the OG song where Pac was kind of singled out his last verse with only 1 take, cause I loved the idea.

[Alucard]

amzing beat from sting ^^, but that's cool I love your song

[Nikola]

Needs banging drums
and you could replay melody and add ur own custom touch, here are notes from top of my head:
A, C#, A, G#, C#, F#, C#, F#, F#, F

good lyrics

[Big G.O.V.]

really nice man, i like ur voice!!!

[HAL 9000]

i liked the song dude.. nice!!

i would put some louder snares or claps in there though...

[Charlie]

thanks for the comments yall! much appreciated!